Sunday, March 15, 2020

Forbidden


Image used for "The Sunday Muse #99"
Forbidden

A smooth-talking serpent
tempted Eve;
Eve, Adam

and in an instant
Good and Evil danced,
not six feet apart, but close

like apples and sin
seafood markets and snakes,
toilet paper and sanitizer.

If only sin weren't so beautiful,
so tempting, if our hearts
didn't turn from red to black so fast.

by Margaret Bednar, March 15, 2020


My attempt to write to the image and current events in five minutes' time.   I'm not saying those who get this virus are sinful - it is our reaction to this whole pandemic I'm referring and it is a bit ironic that a snake may be the cause or the host...  Stay safe everyone. 

linked with "The Sunday Muse #99


9 comments:

qbit said...

Good job bringing the image and current events together. Well done!

C. Sandlin said...

I think this works well--the "bad" and "good" passing together among us until we are overwhelmed, perhaps, with what is more momentarily appealing (or speaks to our desire for control).

Helen said...

This is NOT an attempt, it is good!

indybev said...


This is well-titled and well written. A hairbreadth between good and bad!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Wow, that IS ironic about the snake. I never thought of that. I LOVE this poem!

Carrie Van Horn said...

Wisely spoken & beautifully penned Margaret! Wonderful to have you here for the 99th Muse!

Fireblossom said...

Civilization is just a veneer. Let the power go out for long enough or a plague start leaving bodies in the street, and see how fast everybody turns feral.

Susie Clevenger said...

Love the modern times we live in twist to an apple from Eden't garden

kaykuala said...

It is really frightening Marge! We have not seen the likes of and we are not really sure where it is heading!

Hank