A True Handmaid
Life seeks (from the start) a path toward light,
toward security; a spark needing a Mother,
her tenderness, her fierceness,
her womb; a sacred place in which to bloom.
Separate, yet connected, two bodies, two souls, two lives
needing freedom, the right to nurture, to be nurtured.
We need a society that revers woman, honors the fetus,
a world that sees freedom in life, not death,
a nation seeking forgiveness, swayed not by false tales
but true handmaids, serving others before self.
Understanding that wom(b)an in her essence
is a miracle of (for) creation; losing sight of this is darkness.
by Margaret Bednar, June 7, 2019
This is written in response to "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Wordy Thursday with Wild Woman - Being a Woman in Times Like These" . I am not linking up as I know I will be a very lonely voice. I am pro-life and am very proud of the Republicans for holding up life as a right for the fetus. For the dignity of all women. I believe woman have lost much with the legalization of abortion but I have no wish to discuss (it always becomes a heated, hated argument) it on the internet.
I linked the challenge as some of my visitors may wish to read the other poets' responses. I know I did not exactly follow the prompt - but the real issue is not that women are losing "rights" (plural) but the "right" (which I will denounce abortion as a "right") for legalized abortion. So, I wrote from my point of view that a woman's rights are in a nation that upholds her very special gift AND the fetus's (baby's) right to life as well.
There is NO need to comment - I expect none. You may disagree with me, but please if you do, please do not leave a comment. This is not a debate - it is my response, my voice.
5 comments:
Your poem is beautifully written, Margaret, in your voice, the voice of the loving mother I know you to be, and I respect your right to hold true to your beliefs.
I am drawn in by the line "her tenderness, her fierceness". It's a gift to find the balance between the two.
The list-like pattern of the stanzas is very effective in this poem, seeing all the good things that justify the poem's motif keeps the reader focused on what's important. A passionate and gentle response to a rather difficult issue. I particularly like the beginning, "Life seeks (from the start) a path toward light/toward security". May we (or, at least, those who will come after us) get to live in a world where this can be true for everyone.
Yes, I love that beginning, too. So lovely.
Speaking our truth is essential in today's world. Brava.
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