Wednesday, April 10, 2019

The Pearly Gate


The Pearly Gate

Undulating meadows sprinkled with farms and forested hills
exist beneath Heaven this morning,
and I stand as if at the Pearly Gate,
surely hear angels join a meadowlark's song,
expect any minute souls will rise up from cloud-covered valley
and join me in this warm, soothing light.

I'm grounded with the sight of a house just below the ridge,
a soft light from an upper window, a dog barking.
Begin morning hike, follow the ridgeline route
that dips in and out of intimate swales, 
and onto a fringed green carpet of ferns 
that runs off into open woods;

descending, yet feel blessed.

by Margaret Bednar, April 10, 2019

Linked with "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Open a Book - Poems in April" - pick up a book and open it point to a sentence and use it in a poem.  I used the book "Hiking the Blue Ridge Parkway", page 170 and I used the sentence italicized above.


Also linked with "NaPoWriMo" - National Poetry Month, a celebration of poetry which takes place each April, was introduced in 1996 and is organized by the Academy of American Poets as a way to increase awareness and appreciation of poetry in the United States.

7 comments:

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Wonderful poem for wonderful image. And yes, the line you use is wonderful too. Altogether vividly evocative.

Anmol (HA) said...

Some really beautiful imagery in this verse — thinking of "this warm, soothing light" is so comforting. The line is very well emulated — it seems to be a part of the natural progression in the poem.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Such gorgeous images in this poem, Margaret!😊 I love; "a fringed green carpet of ferns that runs off into open woods."💖

Dom said...

Love the idea of borrowing a sentence and building a poem around it! And what a great sentence you picked! Beautiful imagery and stunning photo. Adored this. <3

purplepeninportland.com said...

This poem fits the image beautifully!

Kim M. Russell said...

You described the scene so well, Margaret, I felt I was there, listening to the meadowlark and the barking dog.

Magaly Guerrero said...

The photo, the imagery in the poem, and your chosen line are magnificent. Your descriptions are always rich and alive. This poem shows that, plus a touch of wonder. And the title is perfect.