Wednesday, December 14, 2022

Grandfather

My youngest son who is in high school now! 

 Grandfather

It's the freedom of childhood,
raised high, secure,
knowing Grandfather won't let go;
playing "I Spy" when laughter erupts.

It's horizons, youthful and old,
merging, finding common goals.
Beneath necklaced peaks of yellow gold
   and sunset clouds of Touraine blue,
'long old black bears trail
resides gossamer lit havens and veiled vaults,
glimpses of time begun,
viewed upon swaying bridge.

Trading preconceived notions
of boring, for adventure tapped
when living begins.
Remnants, delicately interwoven
amidst folds and cracks layered ancient:
triumphs, tragedies, truthful tales
of character and struggle
along hidden, well-worn paths,
beneath blood-red sourwoods 
and pumpkin-hued beech.

It's finding joy in each other,
guidance along rocky paths,
a safe place to rest one's head;

of wisdom shared
and shoulders strong.

by Margaret Bednar, December 14, 2022

Playing along with "Girlie on the Edge's Thursday Six Senctence Story". Word is VAULT. 

I used to live in Boone, NC where Grandfather Mountain is a destination for locals and tourists.  We climbed parts of it many times. 

Grandfather Bednar passed away, but he was full of life and love.  He was very important in our lives and my children adored him.  He had a love and personality as big as a mountain.

Grandfather Mountain's original Cherokee name was "Tanawha" meaning fabulous hawk or eagle.  It is steeped in Native American lore.  HISTORY about Grandfather can be read HERE.

9 comments:

messymimi said...

I think it works just fine.

Doug Jacquier said...

Captivating images and pacing. Perhaps for the last line 'when Tanawha uplifts'

Frank Hubeny said...

I like the thought of trading boring preconceived notions with more adventurous ones.

Spira said...

The spirit of Tanawha lives on.

D. Avery said...

It has a solid footing feel this poem.

Dora said...

I love the use of nature as both metaphor and background for this poem, hinting at how so much of our lives or those moments in time that we cherish have a landscape that's unique to them. I visited Boone once. It is beautiful!

Fireblossom said...

Now I want to Google that mountain and find out about it. I used to love to hike. I can't anymore. :-(

HulderMN said...

Magical blessings in Nature; it renews as much as it frees one from stale convention.

Leonard White said...

Enchanting description of youth, age, and nature.