Spring Abandonment
I walk along a mountain stream
where water rollicks over rock and hill,
like my puppies, joyously fast,
incoherent of March shadows
whose buds are sprouting, stretching,
rising toward dappled light,
filling smudged silence with song,
teasing yawning sprouts
toward spring's sunlit exuberance.
Pinxters first will bloom, delicately curled,
long stems rising, scent sweetly filling the air,
as clusters of violet Birds Foot daintily dot the path.
Trillium soon will march upon forest floor,
Fire Pink, Lady Slippers, & Bleeding Hearts
parading for all they're worth.
The names alone thrill me,
but the puppies gladly trample upon forbidden,
care not for promises of Primrose, Bee Balm & Phlox;
concerned only with the rise & fall of tumbling current,
teasingly splashing, scampering along,
embracing Spring abandonment.
Margaret Bednar, March 28, 2019
I think I used at least 12 of the "Get Listed" words (we were only required to use 3)...
This is linked with "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Get Listed - Late March Edition"
8 comments:
I am literally dancing with joy!❤️ Such a stunning rendition, Margaret!
The very names of the blooms are magical and poetic. What a pleasure to walk these paths with you and your puppies.
Yes, the blossom names speak poetry. This would be a wonderful place to experience spring.
Endearingly perfect picture of spring-time with the added bonus of lots of named flowers. Great word craft Marge!
Hank
Alas we do not have trillium in this area. I loved them when I lived in Pennsylvania. Your descript of your pups fit in perfectly with the stream and the feeling of spring. Wonderful poem this is.
Oh lucky you with TWO puppies! What fun they must have together....I enjoyed picturing all of the blooms. And their big puppy paws!
Love reading the names of the flowers. This is a happy poem, with puppies and all!
Flowers and puppies, you mixed them very well here, even if they don't mix on paper or true life. Puppies do what puppies must do, flowers try to do what they must do. I think there are some bluebonnets a little north and west but we might not visit them this year. I'll take pictures if I do.
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