Late October
Blackgum and sourwood blaze glorious
along with sumac & mountain's virginia creeper.
Always planned vacations 'round
this early showcase of razzle dazzle
but living here now, I'm quietly charmed
with the finale of oranges and yellows of every shade;
hoard these smoldering days of birch, sassafras, and oak -
breath deeply knowing soon all will be equal beneath my feet.
Brown and brittle will be blown away
or cease to crunch long before first freeze and flurry,
but for now the sun's upon my face
and the milkweed pods gently lift from my palm
into late October's violet blue sky and pearly white clouds.
by Margaret Bednar, October 30, 2016
10 comments:
Brown and brittle will be blown away
or cease to crunch long before
first freeze and flurry
Enjoy while we can of late October's last hurrah before the cold winds come sweeping by! Yes, and another year is coming to an end yet again!
Hank
I do enjoy the couplets - the form creates a lightness to the poem as a whole. Your photos always add an extra dimension to your views of nature.
So beautifully described!
It seems so familiar, yet your trees are all different... here November came with rain and wind...so now the leaves are mostly brown...
"hoard these smoldering days of birch, sassafras, and oak -
breath deeply knowing soon all will be equal beneath my feet."
Gorgeous writing of what must happen.
What a wonderful ode to October...........
This is beautiful, Margaret. I too am charmed by the finale of more muted oranges and yellows, which definitely take a back seat to the show-off red. We are in the muted now... soon bare. Sigh.
Pretty writing, Margaret. My mind was searching as I read, and, oops, I envisioned this as coming from a delightful resting place. I could be burried here, I'm sure many were before.
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A truly gorgeous write and a truly wonderful read.
Anna :o]
Beautiful imagery :)
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