A very old cabin - once a home, now filled throughout with split wood! |
A stone cottage I wish I lived in! - |
December Walk
Our winding road threads its way
past time worn and tended,
stones fit snug, wood stacked and stored.
My son races through leaves brown and gray,
past red porch swing, past cattle grazing.
Finds frosted apples upon the ground,
golden cherry tomatoes, overripe,
eyes fast tumbling creek beyond barbwire.
He looks to me for a nod. Doesn't get it.
It's December and the water is cold.
by Margaret Bednar, December 14, 2015
We do make plenty of visits to our rental cottage and these images are along the quaint mountain road. My 8 year old son always notices small, almost hidden things at times. He even held up a "frosted" piece of grass for me to photograph. It's not a grain of sand, but it's a blade of grass :)
12 comments:
There is something so special about those December walks... there is a loneliness... the days are short and to really get out before the sunset is so special.. I recall many such walks in the past.
"He looks to me for a nod. Doesn't get it.
It's December and the water is cold. " Beautiful images throughout this poem and I love the tender ending.
I feel the chill of winter and the warmth of family here.
I went in our pond in the Catskills yesterday--the water was indeed VERY cold and I did not actually swim so much as plunge and shriek--very pretty poem--and lovely kind of break from the flow of description. Good luck with all. k.
Such wonderful images of the dances of the season... and of the familiar interaction of parent and child.
Thank you for taking me on your journey I felt like I was there walking with you especially with the photos!
Brrr. At least he looked to you first for the nod--I know how boys can be! Really nice wintry images and close in your poem. And the photos are just the right touch to make us feel like we experienced the walk with you!
Very beautiful. I liked this walk. I've often wondered if those frosted apples on the ground are still good. And what a lot of chopped wood in that little cabin!!
The ending cracked me up! That's a really gorgeous place, Margaret.
Haha, no nod! Love that.
Did I know you are homeschooling? We do, too.
So much beauty all times of year...I love it when they look for that nod of approval...a very visual poem, Margaret! :)
Having grown up in a warm country I never thought I could get used to those winter walks. I love them. Thanks. I loved your poem.
Greetings from London.
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