Mindless
To live without
is easier said than done,
for thirst is a raging beast.
Deny not my tempest kiss!
Quench this tumultuous lust,
which insists I get my fill
mindless of fury's aftermath.
by Margaret Bednar, 10-3-2012
This is for The Mag #141. Also linked with dVerse "Open Link Night"
20 comments:
So true, it isn't as easy to live without as one would hope. Your words definitely convey that.
Well composed to the prompt!
So well said ... loved the passion in your piece :-)
A variation on the 'love is blind' thing?
Ooooo...sexy.... passionate... demanding.
Smiling
I like mindless of fury's aftermath ~
Passionate write ~
Love the passion in this piece! Thanks for sharing!
Rod E. Kok
http://fifafan.ca
truth.
oh there are some desires it is good to keep stoked...give you just enough to keep you from starving...and well it then promises a next time...smiles.
You speak the truth, girl! Very sexy poem!
Intenst poem - but wonderfully succinct too. Thanks. k.
Awesome creation!
The only way to live! ;)
woww..well said..
Wow this was smouldering , AH, i guess Lust is as important and valid an emotion to us as any other
I like the imagery you have painted here--in no small way inspired by the recent weather, I presume?!! Well penned, Margaret!!
Pointed and passionate. Very nice.
Great poem to the prompt! Lots of emotion looking to be met!
Lots of passion here...
Deep and furious. My kinda love!
The passion jumps out at you. I can feel it.
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