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Back in the day
he was a dashing young man,
and I a country girl, willowy and strong,
both of us full of zest and glee,
first generation polish stock, we.
Toiled side by side,
he decapitating flowers and
suckers stalk after stalk,
stooped, sometimes crawling
between row upon row
of never-ending filth.
I hoed and hoed, black
calloused hands better than gloves.
Every hour or so, his glance, a smile
would lighten my load.
Mid morning break, 8:45,
already exhausted
somehow kept going 'till high noon
clothes soaked through,
already exhausted
somehow kept going 'till high noon
clothes soaked through,
we’d lean our backs
against solitary bleached barn.
Oh, the blessed shade, our haven
in the middle of hell
and we’d consider ourselves lucky
if a snake sighted, the bigger
the better, for we felt reassured
the monstrous rats would be
held at bay for another day.
And so precious minutes, we rested
hands tingling, swollen
blisters burst, pink, tender
skin didn’t stand a chance
of ever remaining baby soft.
Back into the field,
never enough water
to quench our thirst
often feeling dizzy and nauseous,
flamethrower upon our backs.
Times were tough
possessions few,
but my Matka she tell us
“Enjoy this freedom”
and so we did
dignity, self respect, and laughter
filled all our days.
by Margaret Bednar, Art Happens 365, January 12, 2012
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This is linked to "Poetry Jam" - Laugh in the Face of Everything. The awesome photo prompt is at the top of this post.
17 comments:
This oozes strength and character, Ms. Margaret!
Really wonderful, Margaret! Very well written with beautiful imagery. Well done, indeed!
Love what you did with this Margaret!!! Marvelous writing indeed!!!
Like being there when I read this! Great insight, Margaret. You are one super-talented girl!
very nice!
Wondeful, vivid and strong! A really fine contribution to the Jam, Margaret!
I really got into this scene, Margaret! Very descriptive write.
you did an excellent job of weaving a tale for this scene. I love that photo too. you write very well - evidence of your vivid imagination. thanks for stopping by my blog and saying hello, I truly appreciate it. happy day to you.
vivid imagery... fluid expression!
loved it!
there are the most beautiful moments in the middle of hard work...and you found one and put it into words...really nice margaret..enjoyed..
You really brought this to life, Margaret. Great job!
Something is off I left you a message on here- Yesterday ?
Love the photo anyway!
This is wonderful Margaret!
Lots of feeling in this one.
You've captured the hardship of farming so well. It really is blood, sweat and tears.
I did love these two farmers... Thank you for the wonderful words and pat on the back! :)
Laughter takes the edge off hard work...
Thank you everyone. I have been a bit lax in getting around to blog viewing and commenting as we are involved with a theatre play last week and this. Check my Saturday post out ... I have photos of my husband in "Nunsense Amen".
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