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| Photography courtesy of Rosie Hardy for One Stop Poetry |
Isabelle
Perfectly beautiful Isabelle,
she of smokey blue eyes
and dark silken tresses,
extreme sensitivity her allure;
manipulation, my game, unseen.
A playful, loving heart,
wickedly destroyed
by my powerfully curved talons;
vulnerability my stimulation.
My noble exterior a facade
as I swooped, stalked and ripped.
by Margaret Bednar, Art Happens 365, July 17, 2011
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9 comments:
beautiful image, beautiful girl, beautiful ode you've given her and her mice.
she of smokey blue eyes
and dark silken tresses,
extreme sensitivity her allure;
manipulation, my game, unseen.
These lines, these words... your allure. Love the emotional pull of this piece. Porfound writing.
"swooped, stalked and ripped" ...the language is beautifully arranged while depicting gruesomeness after presenting layers of and susceptibility and situational depth. Excellent poem—both visual and emotional. Cheers, Margaret
...she of smokey blue eyes
and dark silken tresses.. what a beautiful description...but then...dang - powerful closure margaret...
and rgd. your question...thought i'd leave it completely open to the reader's interpretation...smiles
Another fantastic work Margaret!
Love this one.
Hope you are have a wonderful Sunday my friend!
quite a gruesome picture in a way; you have done it full honour.
vulnerability my stimulation.
My noble exterior a facade
Chilling, well done.
wow, what a vivid close margaret...you twist us well int he wind after the opening...
There was definitely the suggestion of death about that photo - and you caught it exactly, I think.
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