(For the Friday Flash 55 Version, scroll down)
No Weather Report, Please!
I'm early. This rarely happens,
so I hesitantly approach
the bar alone. Why
does this feel so daring? I mean,
I'm forty-seven, confident,
no fear of flirtations. Come-ons
rarely happen; I'd probably laugh
if they did.
I indulge, order a chocolate martini,
try to sip it slowly, but well, they
go down so easily.
The couple beside me
is roughly my age, she's
dressed to kill, perfume
a bit cloying. She fiddles
with her bracelets, sips
red wine as he talks
about how gray and cloudy
it is outside. A first date,
I decide, until I hear
the bartender praise
"Twenty-fifth anniversary,
fantastic".
I look closer, as I've been
married almost twenty-three.
She's had her hair done recently,
lots of blond. Like me. She could
loose a few pounds. Like me.
She's drinking quite a bit.
Like me, sometimes. She
adjusts her shirt, shows more
cleavage. I've been guilty
of that a few times...
and he's checking his
iPhone, droning on about
the rain, how the lawn
will have to wait. Glances
at the game in the corner
of the bar, still wearing his suit
from the office. No special
preparation, and he needs a shave.
A hand slides about my waist,
a kiss graces my cheek. I raise
an eyebrow, know he can do
better than that. He kisses my lips.
Better. I order another drink
and ban him from talking
about the weather.
by Margaret Bednar, April 10, 2013
This is for
Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Document of Discussion. I twisted it a bit and made it more of an observation/a converstation overheard and my own train of thought. I have a feeling there will be some pretty awesome responses to this prompt so click the link and check it out.
...and here is a version for
Friday Flash 55. I usually like material condensed, but I think I actually like the longer version better. But I gave it a go in 55 words:
Let's Not Talk Weather!
I wait,
notice a woman fiddling
with her bracelets, her hair,
her shirt, revealing more cleavage.
"Happy twenty-fifth", praises
the bartender.
I watch her spouse check
his iPhone, drone on about
the rain, the yard, the traffic.
My husband arrives,
kisses my cheek! ... lips.
Better. And I ban him
from talking about the weather.
by Margaret Bednar, April 10, 2013