Tuesday, October 30, 2012

The Mag #141, "Mindless"


Mindless

To  live without
is easier said than done,
for thirst is a raging beast.

Deny not my tempest kiss!

Quench this tumultuous lust,
which insists I get my fill
mindless of fury's aftermath.

by Margaret Bednar, 10-3-2012

This is for The Mag #141.   Also linked with dVerse "Open Link Night"

20 comments:

Mary said...

So true, it isn't as easy to live without as one would hope. Your words definitely convey that.

Well composed to the prompt!

Green Speck said...

So well said ... loved the passion in your piece :-)

Jinksy said...

A variation on the 'love is blind' thing?

Daydreamertoo said...

Ooooo...sexy.... passionate... demanding.
Smiling

Grace said...

I like mindless of fury's aftermath ~

Passionate write ~

Anonymous said...

Love the passion in this piece! Thanks for sharing!
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ReBelle said...

truth.

Brian Miller said...

oh there are some desires it is good to keep stoked...give you just enough to keep you from starving...and well it then promises a next time...smiles.

Lolamouse said...

You speak the truth, girl! Very sexy poem!

manicddaily said...

Intenst poem - but wonderfully succinct too. Thanks. k.

Innocent Love Poems In Hindi said...

Awesome creation!

Timoteo said...

The only way to live! ;)

sreeja harikrishnan said...

woww..well said..

Kutamun said...

Wow this was smouldering , AH, i guess Lust is as important and valid an emotion to us as any other

Ginny Brannan said...

I like the imagery you have painted here--in no small way inspired by the recent weather, I presume?!! Well penned, Margaret!!

Doctor FTSE said...

Pointed and passionate. Very nice.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Great poem to the prompt! Lots of emotion looking to be met!

Tess Kincaid said...

Lots of passion here...

Helena said...

Deep and furious. My kinda love!

Bee's Blog said...

The passion jumps out at you. I can feel it.