Saturday, June 9, 2018

"Tandem"



Sun
entwines
mountain breeze,
hitches a ride
galloping tandem, lifting mane and tail.

by Margaret Bednar, June 9, 2018


linked with "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Fussy Little Forms - Tetractys".  A line count of 20 syllables (1, 2, 3, 4, 10)

15 comments:

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Sigh... gorgeous!!💞

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is the perfect snapshot!

brudberg said...

Love the breeze lifting the mane(s)

Sophia DiNola said...

Love how the sun and the breeze come alive in this lovely image :)

Linda Lee Lyberg said...

Makes me miss my horse- sigh. So lovely.

Ron. said...

I had a horse once. It was delicious! (Just kidding.)
I enjoyed your poem. (Seriously)

Jim said...

I'm riding along. Pretty horse, pretty verse.
..

Kim Russell said...

I love the way the rhythm builds from a walk, to a trot, a canter and then gallops into the final line!

Marian said...

So pretty! This form does suggest movement, so your subject is perfect. I love it!

Vivian Zems said...

A perfect scene you paint...and great shot.

Helen said...

Great pairing ~ words and image!!!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

I love the idea of sun and breeze galloping tandem . And the girl's hair in the photo.

Sara McNulty said...

So much content in such a brief, lovely poem!

rallentanda said...

Your love of riding shines through this one.

willow_switches said...

Lovely!

this suits the form so well and is perfect compliment to the photo ~