Captured
A day gray in beauty
I walk, content
with simplicity captured.
But then,
a saturated gemstone
appears for a swooping instant
and vanishes amongst the bramble.
Twisting,
I look low, look high,
find him conspicuously stylish
almost eye level, evasive,
suspicious of the
interloper.
Fingers cold, arm heavy,
like a hunter I wait,
motionless.
Finally, a sweet dainty version
full of charm appears
causing Ruby Red
to throw caution to the wind
and pay court.
Head tilting, tail twitching
for the moment distracted,
he's wooed by clever, coy female
who appears to have his heart
in the palm of her hand.
With sites aligned,
I shoot.
Another uplifting experience,
captured, preserved.
by Margaret Bednar, Art Happens 365, February 6, 2012
I wrote this poem thinking the smaller bird was a female cardinal. Alas, I was wrong. I should have remembered they have crests as well. I will just have to go back and wait, this time with a tri-pod.
and for the record, the photos below are the "simplicity captured" that I was content with until "Mr. Fancy Pants" flew by... And I can tell you, I regretted not bringing my tripod on this photo excursion to the bog garden!
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29 comments:
I love coming here. Your photographs have such depth and emotion, to me. I don't look a them and go "that's nice." I look at them and go "OoooOooooh!" :-)
I love the twisty bog garden path. And I love Mr. Cardinal in all his splendor. He is being very patient, I would say, allowing Mr. Purple Finch to use the feeder, also! At least I think that's what that is.
I loved your poem about his courtship of clever Ms. Cardinal. He doesn't stand a chance!
I LOVE your February cardinal, Margaret. OMG!
Fireblossom - I thank you, truly. Very encouraging words for me to hear. ...and isn't that a female cardinal? I hope so as I wrote my poem around it...
Hey hey! so much more like a heart-your cardinals- I never; until others said it, equated heart with that wedge!
smiles...nice fresh take on the magpie margaret...i like the shots too...you have a great eye...
no, that's a male house finch. :)
the park bench and walkway look so inviting!
Well written and the photos are wonderful too!
I don't know if I completely understand the assignment, but it appears to me by looking at your photo prompt, you hit it dead on with the cardinal on the birdhouse. Your pictures and poem are amazing!! I'm inspired by how much creativity is fueling you!
I love the notion of you being a hunter with your camera! Lovely pics, too!
Very nicely done.
The photos and the poem - every bit of it.
Cheers!
JzB
Beautifully written and presented, Margaret! You captured a moment in nature so eloquently while managing to put yourself right in the middle. Impressive!!!
Simply gorgeous photographs, Margaret, stunning in every way!
Being ignorant of even the most basic stuff about photography, I have no idea how a tripod or anything else could have made these pics more beautiful--they are striking. But if you say so...;_) Cardinals are the showboats at our place, too. And just recently we've acquired some white doves--gorgeous things--can't believe people shoot them.
You really capture some great moments.
Can't tell you how much I would love to see one of these astoundingly beautiful birds in my garden. Thank you for bringing it alive in your poetry and photography so I can admire from afar.
Wonderful photos, and I like the interplay of your camera with the magpie art and your words.
So creative.
=)
enjoyed this!
enjoyed this!
Your photographs led up to the Magpie photograph nicely; and your words wove a wonderful and intricate tale.
Your pictures glow and brighten my day....I love the poem that came along with your sighting.
This is lovely ~
beautiful words and stunning pictures..x
Typically Margaret Bednar Brilliance...
I think that the Male is checking out her Ass!!!
nicely done....thanks for sharing
Gorgeous, Margaret. And poetic license allows the finch to be a female cardinal if the poet so designates it! I'm so glad you shared this at Real Toads!
K
Beautiful photography..I love how the magpie prompt had you writing about Cardinals..the beauty of inspiration.
I love the flight you took from the prompt to the Cardinal. And for a frightening moment thought the sight referred to was a gun and not your view finder.
Lovely poem and great photo exhibition you led us on.
"The kiss of the sun for pardon, the song of the birds for mirth, one is nearer God's heart in a garden, than anywhere else on earth." Dorothy Gurney. Thank you for this wonderful poetic journey through your garden, dear Margaret.
Beautiful images, visual and verbal. What a feast!
Love the poem, and your pictures of that gorgeous little bird.
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