As of March 1, 2020 (NOW) I am hosting a NEW Bi-Monthly "Artistic Interpretations" at a new blog site set up for this new challenge. All are welcome, poets, painters, etc. Click on the link below and read the details. I hope you can join the creativity.
Before the clamor and confusion of mid-day,
before shadows slant lean and low
and seagulls dive-bomb a littered beach,
I gaze down the grey-boarded walk
bejeweled with brightly colored umbrellas
and awnings hawking lobster rolls, soft serve, and beer.
It’s a calm before the storm, a respite;
ghostlike. As if I look hard enough,
I’ll transport back in time
when five cents gypsied one down the tracks
to a beachside breeze, promise of a Nathan’s frank,
and a Steeplechase thrill.
Electro Spin and Sea Side Swing seem overshadowed
by Wonder Wheel’s grace (that’s probably still the same)
and Classic Rock rolls its rhythm
as Carousel and Thunderbolt act as grand sentinels
(that’s how I imagine it). I’m eventually drawn to the beach
dotted with small shaded oasis’s, crowded with coolers and chairs.
“Cold Corona’s, Cotton Candy!, Snow Cones”.
“Get it!, Get it!” and I buy 2 umbrellas for $20,
my own refuge beneath a partially cloudy sky,
my own refuge beneath a partially cloudy sky,
close my eyes as a life guard’s whistle blows,
children laugh, bicker, cry
and Latino hip hop filters from over my left shoulder.
and Latino hip hop filters from over my left shoulder.
By Margaret Bednar, July 1, 2019
Linking this with a New Challenge: "Artistic Interpretations - Coney Island, NY" March 1, 2020
This is linked with “The Sunday Muse - Wednesday Muse - Keeping Cool”
And “Imaginary Garden With Real Toads - The Tuesday Platform”
This is linked with “The Sunday Muse - Wednesday Muse - Keeping Cool”
And “Imaginary Garden With Real Toads - The Tuesday Platform”
I invite you to listen to me read my poem:
24 comments:
Maegaret, this will be a classic for me. Thank you for taking us there, wish now I were there. I'll have a Nathan's Hot Dog with chili. Riding out is fun too, the subway train goes overhead, then one can dream of the goings on in the pretty Brooklyn neighborhoods.
Drive safely back today, I don't envy you that.
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You convey the utmost delight in all the sights and sounds! Yippee!
This was a lovely respite from my thoughts this morning, Margaret. Thank you for that.
I really feel that this is made so much sweeter by the memory....
This is absolutely lovely!π I could feel every word and image π
I love a Nathans frank with nustard please! A fun read.
A lovely memory... somehow my idea of a beach is solitude and walks ...but this sounds like a fun break!
That brought me back to my teenage years, including the sound of Latin freestyle on the beach.
I can feel it and hear it and I've never seen it!
Cool in so many senses! :) An evocative write.
A lovely place! You have described it beautifully Margaret!
I have never heard mexican hiphop. Some how I think that would make me hotter, not cooler!
Awesome. Reminded me of my days at Coney Island. Great job!
I never visited a place like this... but it sounds both amazing and amusing.
This is a scene I would very like to be a part of! I listened to it and read along. This is my favourite of yours. I absolutely love narrative poetry ❤️ππ½
What a magical place in your memory. Thanks for taking us along.
Great journey through your thoughts and visuals.
I enjoyed your reminiscences!
Good luck with the new challenge.
I can see, hear, and feel your poem so clearly. I haven't been to Coney in ages! But you know what? I smell the treats and felt the warming laughter through your words.
Thank you for this, Margaret!
Sounds like summer. Sounds like fun!
I anticipate action with each line. I never had a chance to visit the place in person but your verses and pictures give me a chance to visit here.
Thanks for sharing your Summer fun Margaret. Happy you dropped by my sumie Sunday
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much love
Absolutely beautiful, and so much fun! Your poem takes me back to my youth day under the South African sun.
We've been missing you, Margaret. I hope you are alright.
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