Poetic Challenges & Poetic "First Drafts"
i love it as is. :)
I love it!
smiles...hey little man...i like your poem...especially the sounds...i try to use sound in mine as well....def hear the Fall in your words....
I love his poem...after all fall is the time of death...plants that is...lol
He looks like a really cute and energetic little guy, and love this shot of him! quite a cute poem, and hope he gets to see it in print on your blog!
I think he's telling us we should all laugh a little more when we write, huh? Delightful poem and photo!
I love the ending!
ha! good one, trying to change a 5 year old's mind. :) ~
A nice little poem – I like the crunch, crunch crunch and can imagine him crunching the fallen leaves after going over that gate in the picture.
OMG. Of course, he can't help it. He's only just begun. (And that image is to melt my heart!)
The perfect Autumn Collection.
Don't you ever wish you could gather all of Autumn and make it soup to warm the whole wintertime?!
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