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| Photo courtesy of Jaime Clark |
Like incense, almost prayer-like, she surrounds, offers comfort.
I desire full emersion, chant my sins and float carefree,
look skyward into infinity and know I'm loved, forgiven.
by Margaret Bednar, 10.07.12
This was a challenge I found particularly hard for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads "Sunday Mini-Challenge: Sijo (See-szo) which is the Korean cousin of Tanka or Haiku. Click on the above link for a detailed explanation of the form, but below is the "count":
3 - 4, 3 - 4 pause 14 syllables
3 - 4, 3 - 4 pause 14 syllables
3 - 6, 4 - 3 16 syllables (44 - 46 syllables in all!)
I didn't give a "twist" to the ending as the structure and count were challenge enough for this evening!
I have had a bit of a blogger break due to having to find a new stable situation for my horse, Oberon. The move has been made and Oberon and I have already enjoyed a wonderful few days at our new stable - I invite you to follow us at Just Horses. My horse, Sebastian, I sold to my trainer/riding instructor and I will still be able to see Sebastian often as he is not far away.
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| Oberon inspecting his new home (Oct 5, 2012) |


