Friday, September 13, 2013

"Golden" a poem


Golden

Soft fuchsia
gently kisses morning-tide
as I stretch, touch my foot to yours

watch periwinkle
seep into day's first blush
as I turn, kiss your cheek -

recall sitting, holding hands
beneath yesterdays
amber sky -

blessings bestowed,
all because you smiled at me
half a century ago.

by Margaret Bednar, September 13, 2013

The image was taken by a high school friend of mine (isn't it gorgeous).   I wrote this poem in response to an elderly couple I saw walking in the park last year.  We started up a conversation and they told me they were celebrating 50 years - and he winked and said "She's still holding my hand!"  They were adorable.

I will be linking this poem up with Poets United - Poetry Pantry #166  (I will link up on Sunday, Sept 15th)

12 comments:

  1. The photo is beautiful. Congrats on your anniversary.

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  2. Beautiful, Margaret! So wonderful to hear about happy love stories........congrats on your anniversary too!

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  3. NO! Not my anniversary - we are only 23 years - almost half way to our "Golden".

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  4. Margaret, this is such a touching poem! I always love it when I see older couples holding hands or sitting close on a park bench or something. Long lasting love is such a treasure. Your words beautifully capture the treasure it is!

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  5. smiles...its cool to look ahead like that and see your love still going strong when you get there...it is a lovely poem and pic margaret...

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  6. I find those sort of relationships very inspiring.Makes life worth living.

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  7. Beautiful. I see more and more elderly couples holding hands on the street - adorable...

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  8. a real celebration of love......very nicely captured.....

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  9. What a delightful, sweet story, Margartet!

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  10. "all because you smiled at me
    half a century ago." - such a lovely notion.

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