The Lover
Like parchment,
ink stained,
my skin
absorbs your mark,
becomes branded
with wanderlust,
seeks no boundaries,
offers no resistance,
as you traverse
and trace contours,
elevating this journey
of adventurous passion
to blissful heights.
by Margaret Bednar, December 11, 2012
This is for The Mag #147. Check out other peoples "map" poems.
Such a sensual write ~ I like the wanderlust and tracing of contours ~
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Beautifully expressed. Love the tracing of contours.
ReplyDeletenothing like a little wanderlust on your skin and adventurous passion...haha...nice and sensual...
ReplyDeleteYou have traced the contours of passion superbly !!!
ReplyDeleteWanderlust, and blissful heights, these are words that make my heart dance! Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteAmazing thoughts. I often feel like branded parchment.
ReplyDeleteExcellent take on this week'w prompt. Thanks.
ReplyDelete"Like parchment,
ReplyDeleteink stained,
my skin
absorbs your mark"
The visuals in this are wonderful. The piece just oozes sensuality. Nicely penned, Margaret!
Beautiful, sensual take on the prompt...what I see as tastefully erotic.
ReplyDeletevery strong. Great pacing here, everything just seems to flow together seamlessly. Great piece. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.
ReplyDeleteSuch a strong beautiful image.
ReplyDelete...adventurous passion to blissful heights.... yes, and indeed a never ending explorations.... great take...
ReplyDeletesmiles...
This was vivid and beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteI loved how sensual you made it~
Just enough to blur the ink stains!
Wonderful! :D
seductively beautiful. you make the feel of those fingers sound so enticing.
ReplyDeleteOMG! That may be the best tattoo I have E V E R seen! And your poem is perfect for it!
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