Wednesday, December 5, 2012

IGWRT's - Ella's Post - Oliver Twist "Guess Who?"

GUESS WHO?

I pause upon the sidewalk
admire a Norman Rockwell framed with
flowering dogwood, coralbells, blooming vegetable garden
(that is, if he'd painted house portraits)

my eyes search for
brush strokes of Van Gogh
depicting a spirit, bold
(a perfect blend of charm meets warped)

Gladly sink my feet
upon her canvas, find it complete
with childish laughter
(and a hamster upon the sill)

Tail wagging greets me
ever-painting at a frenzied pace
a scene blissfully domestic
(not a thing out of place)

as baby puppy, all cuteness and charm
leads me to a cozy corner chair
beside a crackling Alizarin fire
(and tales, shelf-lined)

I expected pithy rantings (mixed with sarcasm)
and direct reviews; find the hostess
to be warm, witty, and surprisingly rather long winded!
(lesson: never judge a book by its cover)

by Margaret Bednar,  12-5-2012

This is for Imaginary Garden with Real Toad's - Ella's Post "Oliver Twist".   We were to write in the style of Charles Dickens (failed terribly) and describe a fellow "toad" of our garden!  Well, you let me know if you know who this is!  :)

15 comments:

  1. What a wonderful way to introduce our MZ.. The set up is brilliant, and all the elements of character are carefully placed within the structure. Really well done.

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  2. Love it...love the ending. I do believe she doth describe Mama Zen

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  3. Mama Zen! You did a wonderful job!
    Baby Puppy jumped out at me, lol

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  4. and surprisingly rather long winded

    ha!

    Mama Zen. she cool.

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  5. Well summed up character.
    Sadly I don't know any of you well enough to attempt this sort of thing, but can appreciated the ones I read.

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  6. It has to be
    Mama Z!

    Love it! And that Baby Puppy - she is a wonder!

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  7. Can only be the mother of Baby Puppy, our own Mama Zen, and I loved "surprisingly long winded"! LOL
    K

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  8. nowthat really paints an amazing picture

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  9. Your last stanza is my favorite. You all really know each other well!

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  10. smiles...mama z is a pretty cool poet...i think she has found a lot of freedom since moving over to her poetry site....and a wicked good voice...

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  11. I LOVE this! This is just delightful, Margaret!

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  12. You gotta love it when everyone knows who you'll talking about! :)

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