tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post7896002549617477117..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : "The Ultimate Weapon"Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-44636165867941497852018-04-28T16:55:45.100-04:002018-04-28T16:55:45.100-04:00This is so sad...To me, it's the same as murde...This is so sad...To me, it's the same as murder...the killing of a child's spirit. Well penned!Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-36605826596415596542018-04-28T14:18:09.592-04:002018-04-28T14:18:09.592-04:00Oh gosh this breaks my heart - a deeply poignant a...Oh gosh this breaks my heart - a deeply poignant and reflective poem, Margaret!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-69879752657147765452018-04-28T11:44:26.987-04:002018-04-28T11:44:26.987-04:00Verbal abuse is devastating - I remember the '...Verbal abuse is devastating - I remember the 'chipping away, a brightness turning grey'- mostly as a teenager.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-28160498575281637692018-04-28T10:26:29.958-04:002018-04-28T10:26:29.958-04:00This is very sad. Too often we are not prepared, ...This is very sad. Too often we are not prepared, don't understand, don't know, have no idea. Parenting is a big job... one day, it may only be for only a few.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-20457711640446285092018-04-28T09:44:53.342-04:002018-04-28T09:44:53.342-04:00Oh the destruction of those words... I can only im...Oh the destruction of those words... I can only imagine that they are causing other things that will come later... and how it's passed through generations.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-33126174571916574272018-04-28T08:59:23.438-04:002018-04-28T08:59:23.438-04:00If some parents only realized the destruction they...If some parents only realized the destruction they cause with verbal abuse. It is so sad to witness the results. <br />You've described it well. Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-81858603630587928242018-04-28T08:51:36.009-04:002018-04-28T08:51:36.009-04:00So much destruction there.So much destruction there.Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-74784439960468250942018-04-28T08:47:03.159-04:002018-04-28T08:47:03.159-04:00You certainly succeeded in conveying the devastati...You certainly succeeded in conveying the devastating effect of that ultimate weapon.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-17651166898321217632018-04-28T07:47:09.308-04:002018-04-28T07:47:09.308-04:00Margaret your echoes of woe are heartfelt. Luv it,...Margaret your echoes of woe are heartfelt. Luv it, deeply emotional piece.<br />NOW<br />1. As to form if you want to move AWAY from One verse i would have preferred a move to 2 verses rather than 3<br /><br />One of the essential parts of The Fold is that Line 5, i like to call The Crease, [thinking about folding a piece of paper across]<br /><br />SO <br /><br />i welcome a structure of <br />L1 L2 L3 L4 <br />L5 L6 L7 L8 L9 L10 L11<br /><br />AND<br />2. At L11; i would have preferred the repeat to remain 'turning grey'<br /> <br /><br />I WAS able to link you up, Didn't know i could but the link was accepted. <br /><br />have a nice weekend<br /><br />much love...<br />Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.com