Saturday, June 9, 2018

"Tandem"



Sun
entwines
mountain breeze,
hitches a ride
galloping tandem, lifting mane and tail.

by Margaret Bednar, June 9, 2018


linked with "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Fussy Little Forms - Tetractys".  A line count of 20 syllables (1, 2, 3, 4, 10)
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15 comments:

  1. Sanaa RizviJune 9, 2018 at 8:36 AM

    Sigh... gorgeous!!💞

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorJune 9, 2018 at 11:20 AM

    This is the perfect snapshot!

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  3. brudbergJune 9, 2018 at 2:24 PM

    Love the breeze lifting the mane(s)

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  4. Michelle June 9, 2018 at 3:12 PM

    Love how the sun and the breeze come alive in this lovely image :)

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  5. Linda Lee LybergJune 9, 2018 at 5:50 PM

    Makes me miss my horse- sigh. So lovely.

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  6. Ron.June 9, 2018 at 9:13 PM

    I had a horse once. It was delicious! (Just kidding.)
    I enjoyed your poem. (Seriously)

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  7. JimJune 9, 2018 at 9:40 PM

    I'm riding along. Pretty horse, pretty verse.
    ..

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  8. Kim M. RussellJune 10, 2018 at 2:58 AM

    I love the way the rhythm builds from a walk, to a trot, a canter and then gallops into the final line!

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  9. MarianJune 10, 2018 at 9:00 AM

    So pretty! This form does suggest movement, so your subject is perfect. I love it!

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  10. Vivian ZemsJune 10, 2018 at 9:55 AM

    A perfect scene you paint...and great shot.

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  11. HelenJune 10, 2018 at 12:55 PM

    Great pairing ~ words and image!!!

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  12. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJune 10, 2018 at 6:57 PM

    I love the idea of sun and breeze galloping tandem . And the girl's hair in the photo.

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  13. purplepeninportland.comJune 10, 2018 at 8:08 PM

    So much content in such a brief, lovely poem!

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  14. rallentandaJune 11, 2018 at 2:28 PM

    Your love of riding shines through this one.

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  15. AnonymousJune 11, 2018 at 6:41 PM

    Lovely!

    this suits the form so well and is perfect compliment to the photo ~

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