Sunday, February 9, 2014

"February is"



February is

shades of grey and tan,
dull sage green
with etchings of black;

like a bashful beauty
wrapped within woolen coat;

or a cardinal flashing through
forest's canopy.

I take my cue,
plump pillows of grey & tan,
swipe soft-green upon lids,
slip on little black, paint lips red -

drop my robe, remind him
spring's almost here.

by Margaret Bednar, February 9, 2014

This is linked with "Imaginary Garden with Real Toads - Imagined by Heaven" - featuring artist Lisa Graham, HERE.   Also look her up on Facebook.

Also linked with "dVerse Poets Pub - sketchbook in-the-moment poetry" - Claudia has us looking out our window and writing what we see.

This will also be for next week's Friday Flash 55 over at Mr. Know It All's blog HERE - perfect for Valentine's Day, I think! 

30 comments:

  1. It is so nice to realize spring IS almost here...at last. I enjoyed the image of the cardinal!

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  2. there are already whispers...spring is coming...ha...mmm...bet he loved that reminder....smiles.

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  3. That would be a welcome reminder in more ways than one. I love how this poem builds to something of a surprise ending. :-)

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  4. spring is coming... and what makes us young at heart more than the desire of the woman we love ?

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  5. You tease me so... spring is yet many months away here up in the far norht

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  6. that painting is beautiful and love what it inspired...and oh what a beautiful reminder for him...

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  7. ooh la la! February is all those things...and I love the way you sketched it.

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  8. Those closing lines are brilliant, Margaret! Wow!

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  9. Well that ending caught me by surprise ~ Remind him indeed that spring is almost here ~

    Thanks for linking up with Sunday's Challenge in Real Toads ~ Happy Sunday ~

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  10. I love it, Margaret ~~ from the "bashful beauty" to the "dropping" part. The last, a surprise here, revived old memories here. I won't say more.

    We did use the same picture, I was intrigued, I guess by her standing so tall and looking so innocent.
    ..

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  11. I am sure the heat of the reminder would warm his heart ..

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  12. You caught me surprise by the ending! Bashful no more!

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  13. Sexy and bewitching in its straight-forward tone and text. Nicely.

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  14. Beautiful write and I love the ending.

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  15. Margaret, this is deeee-licious! (i'm resisting intoning "photos or it didn't happen," heh)

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  16. I love the way you take a cue from the flashing cardinal and drop your robe… or perhaps I read that wrong… delightful poem.

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  17. Wonderful poem. I really liked the color of the artwork from the artist Lisa Graham you used. Thanks for the link. I enjoyed reading how she began her drawing and painting career.

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  18. It certainly is perfect for Valentine's Day. What a sensuous and tactile poem this is. I will remember the essence of this one for a long time.

    (Thank you for the tip on the movie "Stardust." I have not seen it, looked at imdb for info and have decided it is a must-see. :)

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  19. I would say that this is a good routine for all seasons.

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  20. Margaret...
    Boy you can sure get lost in a moment. And you can take us with you like you always do.
    Loved your Multi Prompt 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your great support, and please have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  21. whoosh! naughty! :) ~

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  22. Green, black and red- huh ? love the cardinal and the lipstick! Thanks-

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  23. To me February feels like a hinge between winter and spring. Great poetic complement of the painting!

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  24. Too many people depend on a groundhog to tell them when to expect Spring.

    I like your way better.

    You said so much with so little. Well done.

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  25. February is horrible. I am so ready for spring.

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