Tuesday, October 30, 2012

The Mag #141, "Mindless"


Mindless

To  live without
is easier said than done,
for thirst is a raging beast.

Deny not my tempest kiss!

Quench this tumultuous lust,
which insists I get my fill
mindless of fury's aftermath.

by Margaret Bednar, 10-3-2012

This is for The Mag #141.   Also linked with dVerse "Open Link Night"
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20 comments:

  1. MaryOctober 30, 2012 at 1:20 PM

    So true, it isn't as easy to live without as one would hope. Your words definitely convey that.

    Well composed to the prompt!

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  2. Amrit SinhaOctober 30, 2012 at 2:11 PM

    So well said ... loved the passion in your piece :-)

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  3. JinksyOctober 30, 2012 at 3:20 PM

    A variation on the 'love is blind' thing?

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  4. DaydreamertooOctober 30, 2012 at 5:23 PM

    Ooooo...sexy.... passionate... demanding.
    Smiling

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  5. GraceOctober 30, 2012 at 5:48 PM

    I like mindless of fury's aftermath ~

    Passionate write ~

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  6. AnonymousOctober 30, 2012 at 6:31 PM

    Love the passion in this piece! Thanks for sharing!
    Rod E. Kok
    http://fifafan.ca

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  7. AnonymousOctober 30, 2012 at 7:55 PM

    truth.

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  8. Brian MillerOctober 30, 2012 at 8:14 PM

    oh there are some desires it is good to keep stoked...give you just enough to keep you from starving...and well it then promises a next time...smiles.

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  9. LolamouseOctober 30, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    You speak the truth, girl! Very sexy poem!

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  10. AnonymousOctober 30, 2012 at 10:04 PM

    Intenst poem - but wonderfully succinct too. Thanks. k.

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  11. Innocent Love Poems In HindiOctober 30, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    Awesome creation!

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  12. TimoteoOctober 31, 2012 at 12:48 AM

    The only way to live! ;)

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  13. SreejaOctober 31, 2012 at 3:35 AM

    woww..well said..

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  14. Silent Otto October 31, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    Wow this was smouldering , AH, i guess Lust is as important and valid an emotion to us as any other

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  15. Ginny BrannanOctober 31, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    I like the imagery you have painted here--in no small way inspired by the recent weather, I presume?!! Well penned, Margaret!!

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  16. Doctor FTSEOctober 31, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    Pointed and passionate. Very nice.

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  17. UnknownOctober 31, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    Great poem to the prompt! Lots of emotion looking to be met!

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  18. Tess KincaidNovember 1, 2012 at 1:07 PM

    Lots of passion here...

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  19. HelenaNovember 2, 2012 at 2:32 PM

    Deep and furious. My kinda love!

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  20. The Blog of BeeNovember 3, 2012 at 3:08 PM

    The passion jumps out at you. I can feel it.

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