tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post869542000713404626..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : Magpie Tales #124 "Purging" & IGWRT's Kerry's Wednesday Challenge & Poetry JamMargarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-50598396428899854922012-07-07T08:37:40.704-04:002012-07-07T08:37:40.704-04:00Great contrast between your hot summer and its ab...Great contrast between your hot summer and its absent yet present polar opposite. Everything travels in pairs in this world of ours. I really enjoyed it.Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-65261564742033111452012-07-05T13:33:08.746-04:002012-07-05T13:33:08.746-04:00Sometimes we need to purge ourselves of the memori...Sometimes we need to purge ourselves of the memories of the hurt of abandonment.<br /><br />Excellent write.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-5120286368258609922012-07-03T23:06:29.077-04:002012-07-03T23:06:29.077-04:00stunning, Margaret! too many wonderful lines to qu...stunning, Margaret! too many wonderful lines to quote!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-92044728700536108702012-07-03T22:27:16.369-04:002012-07-03T22:27:16.369-04:00"Between my fingertips
I'll crush
spine ..."Between my fingertips<br />I'll crush<br /><br />spine tingling endearments<br />and heaven's hands,"<br /><br />Wow Margaret this is powerful!! A mood you caught indeed...well done!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-20483530237001197022012-07-03T16:18:59.226-04:002012-07-03T16:18:59.226-04:00Very well done...I loved it.Very well done...I loved it.Donna B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-90253568737777644892012-07-03T09:25:15.560-04:002012-07-03T09:25:15.560-04:00"Between my fingertips
I'll crush
spine ..."Between my fingertips<br />I'll crush<br /><br />spine tingling endearments"<br /><br />I really like these lines. Somewhere between the sadness and the melancholy feel of the piece, is someone with a firm grasp on the reality of the situation. Shed a tear for what is lost, and then move on to better things. Nice capture, Margaret!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-7138170358612338862012-07-03T00:04:11.513-04:002012-07-03T00:04:11.513-04:00the winter purges us of our activities of summer a...the winter purges us of our activities of summer and then we start again<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/07/02/where-are-the-koi/>where are the koi</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-85548791000554701012012-07-02T19:21:10.469-04:002012-07-02T19:21:10.469-04:00Certainly a heartbreaking mood in this one, very w...Certainly a heartbreaking mood in this one, very well written Margaret!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-81399222240808053882012-07-02T17:01:06.579-04:002012-07-02T17:01:06.579-04:00Beautiful work, Margaret.Beautiful work, Margaret.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-22446962965437813402012-07-02T14:22:40.776-04:002012-07-02T14:22:40.776-04:00poignant (def creates a mood) & lyrical (the b...poignant (def creates a mood) & lyrical (the bard would be proud) - the stated challenges come together seamlessly in this wonderful readAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-12412227653294528052012-07-02T10:27:01.671-04:002012-07-02T10:27:01.671-04:00I always like to see Shakespeare used in creative ...I always like to see Shakespeare used in creative ways. Thanks.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-62574839837360075072012-07-02T10:02:53.974-04:002012-07-02T10:02:53.974-04:00Rising to one challenge is tricky .. combining all...Rising to one challenge is tricky .. combining all three? Masterful!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-69424592062142766742012-07-02T09:33:32.190-04:002012-07-02T09:33:32.190-04:00I can't even begin to imagine all these challe...I can't even begin to imagine all these challenges you are part of, Margaret! You amaze me!Ginnie Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014434422568561157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-61521128689921316092012-07-02T07:45:13.473-04:002012-07-02T07:45:13.473-04:00This is lovely Margaret ~ I like that moment of a...This is lovely Margaret ~ I like that moment of awakening and finding our way out of a darkened sky ~<br /><br />(aka Heaven)Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-24505876361022982172012-07-02T07:11:31.326-04:002012-07-02T07:11:31.326-04:00Ahh.. she is resigned to her fate because of his r...Ahh.. she is resigned to her fate because of his rejection and yet, she still clings to that little bit of hope with the 'freezing these eyes and purifying his heart' She still sees the good. :)<br />Lovely interpretation Margaret.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-33502379613609619662012-07-02T07:08:26.449-04:002012-07-02T07:08:26.449-04:00I enjoyed the 'moody' meditative, reflecti...I enjoyed the 'moody' meditative, reflective quality of this poem.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-47872775780320281012012-07-02T06:38:40.400-04:002012-07-02T06:38:40.400-04:00nice...this is tight magaret....great use of langu...nice...this is tight magaret....great use of language to set the mood for this...between the fingertips i will crush...love that line...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-63690357069743002322012-07-02T06:21:57.576-04:002012-07-02T06:21:57.576-04:00This is just beautiful, Margaret. Rooted in the Sh...This is just beautiful, Margaret. Rooted in the Shakespeare but a stand alone poem in its own right too. Thoroughly enjoyed by this reader.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-60041611372490931832012-07-02T00:47:20.630-04:002012-07-02T00:47:20.630-04:00It is a slippery slope to interpret another's ...It is a slippery slope to interpret another's poetic writing. <br /><br />I sense mixed messages of power, control and pain. But... I could be wrong.Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09127276493023198480noreply@blogger.com