tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post7914594673767466500..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : "Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.", a poem, 115/365Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-67020165062637988822011-01-26T11:58:28.858-05:002011-01-26T11:58:28.858-05:00Thank you all for commenting on this poem. It was...Thank you all for commenting on this poem. It was a struggle for me - almost gave up but think it is important to try these "structured" forms. And I would like to believe that with practice they get easier... The next time a photograph still life, I'm going to try and put my camera on a tripod and activate the 5 second timer - I think I will have a clearer photo that way...Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-2404317952670316512011-01-25T23:15:06.041-05:002011-01-25T23:15:06.041-05:00Lovely poem--you say things so nicely! :)Lovely poem--you say things so nicely! :)forgetmenothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10389986333606868436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-53535202116549709092011-01-25T20:39:42.637-05:002011-01-25T20:39:42.637-05:00Votre Villanelle est tres bien!!Votre Villanelle est tres bien!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-35592051243053237472011-01-25T11:43:52.026-05:002011-01-25T11:43:52.026-05:00very well done margaret - it's all pentameter ...very well done margaret - it's all pentameter and scans very good. you have an interesting content and strong A1 and A2 rhymes (very important because they form the backbone of a villanelle) and the rhymes are well and carefully chosen. kudos - i like itClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-36913895111889632912011-01-25T08:16:44.701-05:002011-01-25T08:16:44.701-05:00Great tribute to a truly worthy figure xGreat tribute to a truly worthy figure xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-65873333122223713862011-01-25T06:16:55.853-05:002011-01-25T06:16:55.853-05:00lovely poem and great shotlovely poem and great shotJustinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131220171499559949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-49489754701942923542011-01-25T00:25:59.027-05:002011-01-25T00:25:59.027-05:00Nice poem -- I can hear it as a gospel song.Nice poem -- I can hear it as a gospel song.Vicki Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08114677510459055768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-74665998553375185202011-01-24T23:28:20.654-05:002011-01-24T23:28:20.654-05:00Love the picture. It would make a beautiful paint...Love the picture. It would make a beautiful painting too. Such a nice tribute to a very memorable man. Great job!Pitterle Postingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02944899733768126383noreply@blogger.com