tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post7818430871105046956..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : "The Kiss Endured"Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-38183092364022026732011-11-09T23:50:45.310-05:002011-11-09T23:50:45.310-05:00Thank you. I thought this was a real fun prompt.Thank you. I thought this was a real fun prompt.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-63766970189004048552011-11-05T15:35:04.275-04:002011-11-05T15:35:04.275-04:00how creative,
wow, you are blazing a trial here.
:...how creative,<br />wow, you are blazing a trial here.<br />:)The Noiseless Cuckooclockhttp://www.thenoiselesscuckooclock.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-84166183909598102262011-11-05T13:11:39.966-04:002011-11-05T13:11:39.966-04:00so glad to hear it's fiction! a wonderful exam...so glad to hear it's fiction! a wonderful example of the Man'yoshu form ~ you told the story subtly which heightened the impact. love it!<br />daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-33353131116927787382011-11-04T21:34:07.681-04:002011-11-04T21:34:07.681-04:00Oh, ouch! I love poetry with a surprising bite at ...Oh, ouch! I love poetry with a surprising bite at the end. Glad it's fiction. :)✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-92070587739368922722011-11-04T15:25:42.660-04:002011-11-04T15:25:42.660-04:00Jinsky... It isn't her husbands embrace she is...Jinsky... It isn't her husbands embrace she is yearning for.. I couldn't find a better two syllable word than "endure" for "put up with"...Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-49502620264901714042011-11-04T14:57:35.452-04:002011-11-04T14:57:35.452-04:00Whoa! 'Endure' sounds too painful for comf...Whoa! 'Endure' sounds too painful for comfort?!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-32327567699828090582011-11-04T13:53:30.558-04:002011-11-04T13:53:30.558-04:00oh oh - wondering if the husband also has some pha...oh oh - wondering if the husband also has some phantasies behind his closed eyes...smiles...well spun..and glad it's fiction..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-13105438661165673302011-11-04T10:29:06.036-04:002011-11-04T10:29:06.036-04:00very kool. a kiss with eyes on another. I believ...very kool. a kiss with eyes on another. I believe you captured this form superbly. An enjoyable, inspiring read.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2011/11/04/toukon-the-fighting-spirit/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-51917423466380095362011-11-04T07:44:24.352-04:002011-11-04T07:44:24.352-04:00Well done!Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-60150503827179450142011-11-04T02:08:29.751-04:002011-11-04T02:08:29.751-04:00Endure is like a beacon...I love it! One I won'...Endure is like a beacon...I love it! One I won't forget!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-32917071733492413712011-11-04T00:23:58.606-04:002011-11-04T00:23:58.606-04:00Fantasies are very good for you--a very nice take ...Fantasies are very good for you--a very nice take on the prompt.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-17144842997867054462011-11-03T22:18:38.786-04:002011-11-03T22:18:38.786-04:00oo la who is it you see behind those eyes...ha...o...oo la who is it you see behind those eyes...ha...ok i know its fiction...well spun...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-62840624062448782662011-11-03T20:49:42.764-04:002011-11-03T20:49:42.764-04:00Margaret, I 'got' it. "Endured"...Margaret, I 'got' it. "Endured" was the key! Her mind was elsewhere.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-47501974007905584532011-11-03T20:14:11.228-04:002011-11-03T20:14:11.228-04:00RMP... I think you are the only one that got that ...RMP... I think you are the only one that got that while she is kissing her husband, she is longing for another. I guess I didn't quite succeed with this.<br /><br />Everyone, thanks for the comments! It always makes my day. :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-86497070110625544592011-11-03T19:17:28.295-04:002011-11-03T19:17:28.295-04:00I hear a play on the common theme mentioned by Lad...I hear a play on the common theme mentioned by Lady Nyo in her introduction to Man’yoshu poetry, "repeated interest in ‘the wife of another’ was an object of male desire."<br /><br />I think you played this piece quite well. lovely!RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-80643093623753700712011-11-03T18:56:36.673-04:002011-11-03T18:56:36.673-04:00Point of pure madness, that's the fun part :)....Point of pure madness, that's the fun part :).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-65496559857573830652011-11-03T18:54:40.524-04:002011-11-03T18:54:40.524-04:00oh lordy!oh lordy!TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-8583045726882861342011-11-03T18:46:03.997-04:002011-11-03T18:46:03.997-04:00Love play in the springtime of love! Well written;...Love play in the springtime of love! Well written; you took me there. This is fun, isn't it? So glad you came by and linked.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-59920674636041245272011-11-03T17:07:50.454-04:002011-11-03T17:07:50.454-04:00endure my spouses kisses...hmmmm that can be taken...endure my spouses kisses...hmmmm that can be taken several ways....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com