tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post765782005588140759..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : dVerse - Literary Allusion, "The Interlude"Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-20589485985209272252012-11-22T03:14:12.975-05:002012-11-22T03:14:12.975-05:00oh, my! that would be awkward! {smile}
♥oh, my! that would be awkward! {smile}<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-88682287719829359642012-11-19T08:08:49.354-05:002012-11-19T08:08:49.354-05:00HA! I see none os us expected that! How fun. :)...HA! I see none os us expected that! How fun. :)Ginnie Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014434422568561157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-58781789175559422332012-11-16T19:46:27.655-05:002012-11-16T19:46:27.655-05:00Ouch -- how common -- how repeatedly common.
A gre...Ouch -- how common -- how repeatedly common.<br />A great surprise -- well done.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-85462711942803687692012-11-16T13:24:27.284-05:002012-11-16T13:24:27.284-05:00I enjoyed the twist at the end and the wonderful e...I enjoyed the twist at the end and the wonderful expression of passion. A few years ago I saw a Toulouse-Lautrec exhibit at the Art Institute in Chicago...so many works. And yet, I'd never seen this one before. Thanks.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-35084889919895290022012-11-16T12:20:45.117-05:002012-11-16T12:20:45.117-05:00ha oh my...i didn't expect that closure...what...ha oh my...i didn't expect that closure...what a "delicate" moment...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-71720961863116810902012-11-16T12:01:07.030-05:002012-11-16T12:01:07.030-05:00Oops! very clever and very psychologically real t...Oops! very clever and very psychologically real too. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-37052440909266631592012-11-16T10:24:19.501-05:002012-11-16T10:24:19.501-05:00I agree with those who say all sex takes place in ...I agree with those who say all sex takes place in the mind--I think your poem illustrates that perfectly, and also captures the heat of the painting.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-41947510365366180552012-11-16T09:08:27.876-05:002012-11-16T09:08:27.876-05:00Oh, wow. Excellent work, Margaret!Oh, wow. Excellent work, Margaret!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-28062316880521753002012-11-16T08:25:19.953-05:002012-11-16T08:25:19.953-05:00Love the one you're withLove the one you're withMr. Charlestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17497415823443875308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-87785193693728730822012-11-16T08:05:53.053-05:002012-11-16T08:05:53.053-05:00Lautrec inspires doesn't he ?Lautrec inspires doesn't he ?Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-6792052161435663102012-11-16T06:16:03.332-05:002012-11-16T06:16:03.332-05:00I'm still wondering about the twist -- there a...I'm still wondering about the twist -- there are so many ways to view it! Fine bit of crafting, though.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-4481213751154461002012-11-16T02:12:39.020-05:002012-11-16T02:12:39.020-05:00A passionate piece with a twist ... wow !!! Deligh...A passionate piece with a twist ... wow !!! Delightful :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-84871151260648709272012-11-16T00:51:26.274-05:002012-11-16T00:51:26.274-05:00I always feel that our fantasies enhance our reali...I always feel that our fantasies enhance our realities. Superb and unexpected!ninothttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-86258121536463286002012-11-16T00:07:41.571-05:002012-11-16T00:07:41.571-05:00This works with the hug of a woman too, and then o...This works with the hug of a woman too, and then open eyes. The wrost part is they can tell, usually, they were not the one being hugged. Some loves are hard to forget, or times. Sometimes the person we are hugging is the same person, but remembered the same way. Anyway, I enjoyed this much.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/11/15/i-watch-a-leaf-die/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-57561071912666390372012-11-15T22:05:51.794-05:002012-11-15T22:05:51.794-05:00whoa..
This was wonderful, such great visual paint...whoa..<br />This was wonderful, such great visual paintings of the dance of intimacy...wow! Then you shock us...<br />I love it! <br />Happy Birthday!!!<br />I'm singing, lol<br />@>---------Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-65617880239731399092012-11-15T20:46:24.473-05:002012-11-15T20:46:24.473-05:00Lovely write and I don't think I have ever see...Lovely write and I don't think I have ever seen this painting by Lautrec...quite wonderful as is your poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-88274205689294617692012-11-15T18:19:38.960-05:002012-11-15T18:19:38.960-05:00I love the visuals you paint with your words. You ...I love the visuals you paint with your words. You take us softly into the south with images of sun peeking through plantation blinds, then surprise us with images of rather illicit embrace:<br /><br />"arms and legs unscramble,<br />as I realize "he" isn't "you". "<br /><br />Well captured, this "Interlude!"<br />Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-61515583482286499332012-11-15T18:19:22.802-05:002012-11-15T18:19:22.802-05:00Oh my. Well told, you left no hints along the way ...Oh my. Well told, you left no hints along the way for the surprise at the end!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-37423863582519895272012-11-15T17:26:31.539-05:002012-11-15T17:26:31.539-05:00I beg to differ~i love both BJ movies. The hugh/co...I beg to differ~i love both BJ movies. The hugh/colin fight is a classic, and what guy can resist parachute panties?<br />Your poem reminded me of bridget sky diving~a wild ride with an awkward finish.<br />Nice twistFar Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-32273428135353712362012-11-15T17:23:45.325-05:002012-11-15T17:23:45.325-05:00Amazed by the ending... this is great, Margaret!Amazed by the ending... this is great, Margaret!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-80995172915505669372012-11-15T17:21:52.268-05:002012-11-15T17:21:52.268-05:00Phew.... Hot, scorching in fact.
Beautifully told....Phew.... Hot, scorching in fact.<br />Beautifully told. Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-79482853989634411662012-11-15T17:02:23.973-05:002012-11-15T17:02:23.973-05:00wow, what a turn!
loved the 'precision' in...wow, what a turn!<br />loved the 'precision' in this... and definitely did not expect the ending.<br />great write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-52457041556339094802012-11-15T16:57:22.799-05:002012-11-15T16:57:22.799-05:00it is a bit rude when the morning does not match t...it is a bit rude when the morning does not match the dream...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-77015657236281722902012-11-15T16:52:56.220-05:002012-11-15T16:52:56.220-05:00ahem, well the end there is a bit of a shocker.......ahem, well the end there is a bit of a shocker....haha...what goes on behind the closed eyes of a passionate embrace....errr...well an awquark moment...lol...nicely done margaret....think i remember this one...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com