tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post7156562796285272918..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : "Veiled Window"Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-86259113537959424782014-08-28T02:14:13.632-04:002014-08-28T02:14:13.632-04:00A sweet poem! Never mind how you came by it, it&#...A sweet poem! Never mind how you came by it, it's a keeper.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-84785425619972156022014-08-27T16:21:56.683-04:002014-08-27T16:21:56.683-04:00This is truly so beautiful, Margaret, and I love t...This is truly so beautiful, Margaret, and I love the image you chose here.Lisa Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06638444295223502727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-49105539027588836942014-08-27T13:35:19.402-04:002014-08-27T13:35:19.402-04:00A challenging form to tackle, but you managed to c...A challenging form to tackle, but you managed to create a piece that flows nicely and conveys a clear message. Nice work, Margaret!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-74437758883185522162014-08-27T04:47:14.765-04:002014-08-27T04:47:14.765-04:00such a passionate write... really enjoyed this.such a passionate write... really enjoyed this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-1459115522609013992014-08-27T03:54:15.165-04:002014-08-27T03:54:15.165-04:00oh nice... i love the tender and passionate voice ...oh nice... i love the tender and passionate voice in this...so french...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-64585913520501118392014-08-27T03:49:17.253-04:002014-08-27T03:49:17.253-04:00A new Andrew Marvel inside of Margaret--except thi...A new Andrew Marvel inside of Margaret--except this proposal and offering is much more seductive by far.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-6336089244135881532014-08-27T02:59:10.499-04:002014-08-27T02:59:10.499-04:00No worries, I didn't mean to sound prescriptiv...No worries, I didn't mean to sound prescriptive. My poem was just a suggestion but I love the one you used. Your poem captures a very different mood to the French poem, but it's very romantic, very seductive.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-31506412345033726952014-08-27T00:47:28.505-04:002014-08-27T00:47:28.505-04:00It's beautiful.. And I guess anything in Frenc...It's beautiful.. And I guess anything in French would become a love poem. I love the longing behind the veiled window,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-62873786025224621402014-08-26T22:26:21.605-04:002014-08-26T22:26:21.605-04:00very nice - the romance between the words really g...very nice - the romance between the words really gave it feelingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-4086741120848083192014-08-26T22:14:19.364-04:002014-08-26T22:14:19.364-04:00You make it feel, sound, seem to be a literal tran...You make it feel, sound, seem to be a literal translation of the French; teasing, romantic--no mean feat. I chose a Spanish Neruda poem. Marina just gave us a back up if we chose to use it.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-90550574859985401742014-08-26T21:28:31.329-04:002014-08-26T21:28:31.329-04:00You paint a lovely picture...sounds sweet to the e...You paint a lovely picture...sounds sweet to the ear...Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-91168588994226538682014-08-26T20:14:48.092-04:002014-08-26T20:14:48.092-04:00Hi Margaret, I don't it matters what poem you ...Hi Margaret, I don't it matters what poem you use, I did try a Lithuanain one but couldn't make any sense of it so I took the easy way of using Marina's poem. I think you have done exceptionally well. Hope you enjoy your six kids as much as I enjoy my six.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-77468676142089531322014-08-26T20:10:14.613-04:002014-08-26T20:10:14.613-04:00This reads beautifully Margaret ~ I specially lik...This reads beautifully Margaret ~ I specially like the line break:<br /><br />Surely my kisses<br />Prized. Oh, sancutary<br />For me, desire to<br />Parlay - regard my<br />Lips. <br /><br />The french poem sounds so romantic ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-20497946657332772212014-08-26T20:09:27.657-04:002014-08-26T20:09:27.657-04:00This is lovely—so glad you posted it.This is lovely—so glad you posted it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-70518234714025016532014-08-26T20:06:48.923-04:002014-08-26T20:06:48.923-04:00oo la, you played a bit of the seductress it seems...oo la, you played a bit of the seductress it seems...without pushing it over...love the whole middle section...<br /><br />Oh, sancutary<br />For me, desire to<br />Parlay - regard my<br />Lips.<br /><br />as lips are the sanctuary...<br />if only they open the veiled window....smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com