tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post5623141402288715918..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : "Revered" and IGWRT's - Sunday Challenge "Nine Lives"Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-41957728733597194422012-11-22T03:21:59.441-05:002012-11-22T03:21:59.441-05:00cats certainly have cellular memories of being div...cats certainly have cellular memories of being divine and revered... and they let us know we should still be worshiping them!<br /><br />i thought you did wonderfully with such a difficult form!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-47797076904440735502012-11-12T22:42:55.005-05:002012-11-12T22:42:55.005-05:00*True confession: I didn't watch the whole vid...*True confession: I didn't watch the whole vid...but what I saw of it is cool.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-6604083745396701392012-11-12T22:42:01.288-05:002012-11-12T22:42:01.288-05:00Wonderful use of the form, and I love your subject...Wonderful use of the form, and I love your subject. Cool video clip too!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-35966405246940093762012-11-12T13:00:44.595-05:002012-11-12T13:00:44.595-05:00Mystifying...I just love the opening poem and am g...Mystifying...I just love the opening poem and am glad you used this powerful image in your form...such a great job, Margaret, truly!! :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-63768227050472360642012-11-12T06:50:07.249-05:002012-11-12T06:50:07.249-05:00My cat would love it..well done..My cat would love it..well done..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-68222091142983949782012-11-12T04:11:22.063-05:002012-11-12T04:11:22.063-05:00I've never owned a cat, Margaret, but I have a...I've never owned a cat, Margaret, but I have a feeling that if I did, I'd be opened to a brand new world!Ginnie Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014434422568561157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-53098418793595308852012-11-11T23:39:02.029-05:002012-11-11T23:39:02.029-05:00Love the photo and the poem. You have done such a ...Love the photo and the poem. You have done such a wonderful job with the form and communicating the lineage of the domestic feline. I have three of them and I don't know what I would do without them.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-53781380626981994602012-11-11T17:57:33.681-05:002012-11-11T17:57:33.681-05:00You mastered the form beautifully. And doesn'...You mastered the form beautifully. And doesn't it just feel good?Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-9548099132430625162012-11-11T17:24:15.737-05:002012-11-11T17:24:15.737-05:00I love how the first poem seems to say, "you ...I love how the first poem seems to say, "you think you know me, think youv'e seen all there is of me~but only because i like it that way"<br />Very good!Far Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-24983664200396670752012-11-11T13:03:17.779-05:002012-11-11T13:03:17.779-05:00I totally agree on how hard this one was, Margaret...I totally agree on how hard this one was, Margaret--I started yesterday and tore two poems completely up(figuratively--actually hit the delete key. ;_) )then started again at 6 this morning, then spent at least two hours counting and tweaking. But I love the way this sort of thing makes us get our minds in gear, makes words sometimes just happen. Your first poem in free verse is lovely, but your second in the form, seems more mysterious and cat-like. Thanks for the video also--I will be back to view when I have a little more time. I love that kind of stuff.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-30572183201370979592012-11-11T11:50:35.168-05:002012-11-11T11:50:35.168-05:00These are both gorgeous! You did an incredible jo...These are both gorgeous! You did an incredible job with the form!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-3384189539052157322012-11-11T10:36:35.430-05:002012-11-11T10:36:35.430-05:00I love that you came back to your cat theme to try...I love that you came back to your cat theme to try out the Macneice stanza! The impressive nature of felines is just as strongly felt in the condensed lines.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-13811054561972709772012-11-11T10:27:13.059-05:002012-11-11T10:27:13.059-05:00love it! you did a great job with the form. and, a...love it! you did a great job with the form. and, as i've been begging for more photos of cats in the wake of the election distracting us from same, i so appreciate your subject matter :)Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-41735521738567121212012-11-11T08:29:18.470-05:002012-11-11T08:29:18.470-05:00You can pretty much read what is in a dogs mind bu...You can pretty much read what is in a dogs mind but cats are entirely different. They are aloof, highly intelligent and, it is as if they 'tolerate' our presence as a necessary evil into their world.<br />Fabulous poetry Margaret. Not a form I would care to tackle at all. I love the ancient connections all though this and think this is one of your best but then, they are all really good.<br />RYN: Everything I read about them said she was 16 when they met and they married after 2 weeks of knowing each other. The age difference does make you cringe, doesn't it. Creepy. But yes, he took some brilliant fine art nudes of her. :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-31160186229768828172012-11-11T08:09:32.149-05:002012-11-11T08:09:32.149-05:00I think this may be one of the most difficult poem...I think this may be one of the most difficult poem forms I have ever tried, and I didn't quite do it 100% to the rules. I DO think, when done perfectly, it reads beautifully. I will try and come back to this form ... but first I have to recover from this one :)<br /><br />Such lovely comments! They do so much to encourage me. Thank you all.<br /><br />Wanda - yes, as long as I have my thumbs, my cats (and dogs) will need me. :) haMargarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-15044488109427300592012-11-11T07:43:06.347-05:002012-11-11T07:43:06.347-05:00The poem is written with obvious care - not just a...The poem is written with obvious care - not just about the form and structure, but about the content, as well - I think any cat would purr for you and twine themselves around you with adoration for having penned them with honor. I love all animals, but most especially cats, dogs and horses (although I still remain rather fond of a large brown-eyed llama that kissed me on the cheek once). I had 3 cats at one time, a brother and sister I got as kittens and then one from her litter, a few years later - so I had 1 orange tabby and 2 black cats. When I had surgery, they laid on the bed next to me for over a week, rarely leaving my side. There's a funny saying that's one of my favorites - I don't know who the original source was. "When considering getting a pet, just remember this: a dog thinks you're family and a cat thinks you're staff." There's a lot of truth to that and I have been proudly owned and unconditionally loved by all - as long as I has opposable thumbs (for the can opener and the deadbolt), I could be assured of their devotion...and yes, I spoiled them rotten - they definitely deserved it. Thank you for sharing your tender and beautiful artistry. It's very enjoyable and heartening to visit your pages. I am sorry about your hair, though. :) Wanda Lea Braytonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12909481380135318787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-62286265482819099042012-11-11T03:50:40.297-05:002012-11-11T03:50:40.297-05:00I loved this poem and the ideas behind and in fron...I loved this poem and the ideas behind and in front of it, so I did not count the form. But after struggling with the form myself I am here to tell you I admire the skill here which makes this poem so very concise, spare, and witty.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-31475741794348692132012-11-11T02:04:58.065-05:002012-11-11T02:04:58.065-05:00Cats are mystical beings ... loved your words !!!Cats are mystical beings ... loved your words !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-56533099571922861322012-11-11T01:37:35.968-05:002012-11-11T01:37:35.968-05:00I can certainly understand the nearly-hair-tearing...I can certainly understand the nearly-hair-tearing, Margaret. Syllable counts, double rhymes, single rhymes, masculine, feminine...I thought I had stumbled upon something written by a leftover Hallowe'en witch masquerading as our Kerry.<br />LOVE what you did with the cats, however. Never has there been such an undomesticated pet as the cat whose domicile is a peopled house.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-89046298868212989142012-11-10T20:33:08.198-05:002012-11-10T20:33:08.198-05:00Your cat TOTALLY embodies the spirit of the sculpt...Your cat TOTALLY embodies the spirit of the sculpture. Wonderful! Revered, indeed - I wish humans had some of their confidence!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-67887526753742508942012-11-10T15:27:42.324-05:002012-11-10T15:27:42.324-05:00As you know, I love to use cats as symbols and cha...As you know, I love to use cats as symbols and characters in my poetry. Bosco the dog does not approve of this practice, but I persist. Blame the Goddess!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-18661089439797798192012-11-10T13:10:44.056-05:002012-11-10T13:10:44.056-05:00I love the whole idea behind this poem, Margaret. ...I love the whole idea behind this poem, Margaret. I like to think of the proud lineage that stands behind something as common as a house cat.. the secret in the green eyes.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-5264654161982535742012-11-10T12:51:17.289-05:002012-11-10T12:51:17.289-05:00i like that - never forgetting its royal heritage....i like that - never forgetting its royal heritage.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com