tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post4817023527880746820..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : dVerse Form for All - Cinquain "Moonlit"Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-69144945978425417532013-03-16T05:31:10.679-04:002013-03-16T05:31:10.679-04:00A treat!
both visually and in words.
BTW, call me ...A treat!<br />both visually and in words.<br />BTW, call me dumb, but I didn't see a deviation from the norm in form.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-75115154842336275692013-03-15T12:52:42.370-04:002013-03-15T12:52:42.370-04:00Wonderful photograph! Beautifully written cinquai...Wonderful photograph! Beautifully written cinquains...immortality addressed so well in so few words;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-31682913629036011652013-03-15T09:27:39.513-04:002013-03-15T09:27:39.513-04:00Fabulous wordplay here - and a really beautiful, p...Fabulous wordplay here - and a really beautiful, peaceful mood too. I love the possible dual meaning of embrace and "it's enough/ to savor being loved" - which does have a rhyme :-) Kudos too for breaking the traditional layout of the form to suit your purposes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-37489366384786917752013-03-15T08:45:26.464-04:002013-03-15T08:45:26.464-04:00It soothes the feel, Marge! Yes, short poems have ...It soothes the feel, Marge! Yes, short poems have that appeal. Nicely!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-11567359335354912332013-03-15T08:32:12.538-04:002013-03-15T08:32:12.538-04:00Hi, Margaret~ Such a beautiful piece... poem and p...Hi, Margaret~ Such a beautiful piece... poem and pic. I especially like the second one. Embrace is such a good word choice.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-50650677848250363872013-03-15T05:04:15.125-04:002013-03-15T05:04:15.125-04:00Two exquisite examples of cinquains. Very well don...Two exquisite examples of cinquains. Very well done.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-19988670455466332502013-03-15T04:55:15.894-04:002013-03-15T04:55:15.894-04:00A calming effect, yes, deeply felt and lovely. I s...A calming effect, yes, deeply felt and lovely. I savor the possible meanings of 'embrace' in the last cinquain. Subtle.JayGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817675980200134668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-89330863377206064042013-03-15T02:56:35.367-04:002013-03-15T02:56:35.367-04:00I love the moon, and your poem is full of it :-)I love the moon, and your poem is full of it :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-38148674063533521662013-03-15T00:51:55.474-04:002013-03-15T00:51:55.474-04:00oh nice..i esp. loved, loved, loved the unearthly ...oh nice..i esp. loved, loved, loved the unearthly amphitheater... so cool...so visibly painted..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-91982281579724145842013-03-15T00:00:49.442-04:002013-03-15T00:00:49.442-04:00These are beautiful and, like Brian, I especially ...These are beautiful and, like Brian, I especially like the separation of the last word from the rest of the stanza.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-44473223380566891352013-03-14T23:26:36.404-04:002013-03-14T23:26:36.404-04:00Very pretty. Serene has a very moonish feel to me...Very pretty. Serene has a very moonish feel to me. I don't know that it is related as a word, but it goes with the moon certainly. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-24964798530938224432013-03-14T22:58:18.260-04:002013-03-14T22:58:18.260-04:00....i search the midnight sky for immortality --- .......i search the midnight sky for immortality --- ah, how often i've done the same... wide awake in the witching hour... owling... and intimate with the moon... lovely cinquains... and your accompanying photo looked like an eye staring at me as if we're truly connected to each other... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-19699951876453400532013-03-14T22:14:48.994-04:002013-03-14T22:14:48.994-04:00I love the meaning the second one here had for me....I love the meaning the second one here had for me. It's hard to accept that we are truly worthy of love at times.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13646917707699645492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-18201410595349850202013-03-14T21:36:00.241-04:002013-03-14T21:36:00.241-04:00Very nice. I love the moon as well. The Goddess....Very nice. I love the moon as well. The Goddess.Mr. Charlestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17497415823443875308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-78966869337525271992013-03-14T21:13:42.845-04:002013-03-14T21:13:42.845-04:00Caught in the blue mood of piercing peace! BEAUTI...Caught in the blue mood of piercing peace! BEAUTIFUL Margaret ~ Sincerely Deborah Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-32156245671260671792013-03-14T20:07:14.173-04:002013-03-14T20:07:14.173-04:00such a beautiful poem - I too liked the line break...such a beautiful poem - I too liked the line breaks - gave the poem its wonderful rhythm. KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-28696229353579568082013-03-14T20:03:31.498-04:002013-03-14T20:03:31.498-04:00I love the moonlit serenity ~ A gorgeous picture ...I love the moonlit serenity ~ A gorgeous picture too Margaret ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-41166147172730534912013-03-14T20:00:37.886-04:002013-03-14T20:00:37.886-04:00Your altered form ( line breaks and joining the tw...Your altered form ( line breaks and joining the two) powerfully conveys deeper meaning than the two would have done if presented in a traditional way. I like this clever device, Margaret.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-87212182440705415702013-03-14T20:00:24.361-04:002013-03-14T20:00:24.361-04:00Your cinquains, Margaret, give me a feeling of pea...Your cinquains, Margaret, give me a feeling of peacefulness. Beautiful...........Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-62234027809380239712013-03-14T19:54:35.615-04:002013-03-14T19:54:35.615-04:00nice....i appreciate the minor variation of breaki...nice....i appreciate the minor variation of breaking out the last lines to stand alone and effectively link these...ha...thta is the kind of experimentation within form i like...smiles...<br /><br />unearthly amphitheater,...is a very cool line...and the savoring of feeling loved...mmm...i like...of course i am a romantic...haha...<br /><br />well played margaretBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com