tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post3925144112954578041..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : Magpie Tales #89 "A Writer's LamentMargarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-1097324016744350682011-11-17T06:25:52.723-05:002011-11-17T06:25:52.723-05:00Dear Margaret
Its good to come back to this lovel...Dear Margaret<br /><br />Its good to come back to this lovely verse again...<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-where-you-will-go.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-82211570691326899642011-11-16T12:55:55.631-05:002011-11-16T12:55:55.631-05:00Love your seductive take on writing...because that...Love your seductive take on writing...because that intimacy with the words is so important in order to create such passion...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-10364252154107013882011-11-15T21:33:33.377-05:002011-11-15T21:33:33.377-05:00I especially enjoyed the image of offering the hea...I especially enjoyed the image of offering the heart on fragile parchment.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-61084935851805960962011-11-15T20:40:22.172-05:002011-11-15T20:40:22.172-05:00Nicely done. My mind was not thinking of a type wr...Nicely done. My mind was not thinking of a type writer that is for sure! :)Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-42272706242897786492011-11-15T18:17:18.883-05:002011-11-15T18:17:18.883-05:00Lovely share... intimate yet sad that you can'...Lovely share... intimate yet sad that you can't express your love and dedication. Surely and hopefully in time, you can ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-41967422349065174532011-11-15T18:00:24.339-05:002011-11-15T18:00:24.339-05:00smiles. i remember this one...all hot and steamy a...smiles. i remember this one...all hot and steamy about writing...smiles...but yes it is an intimate dance...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-73452269900003485132011-11-04T01:53:15.469-04:002011-11-04T01:53:15.469-04:00Dear Margaret
This is lovely.. I enjoyed your sof...Dear Margaret<br /><br />This is lovely.. I enjoyed your soft tempo... slowly rising to crescando as he crumples it in spitful retrun... I liked your lines.. <br /><br />"With oceans of love letters inside me and<br />talented ideas rolling in with the tide;"<br /><br />So vivid and imaginative..<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-fire-faayar-faayaar-dedicated.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-16162972229593355722011-11-01T20:19:17.839-04:002011-11-01T20:19:17.839-04:00i can totally relate to this. sort of how I'm ...i can totally relate to this. sort of how I'm feeling at the moment. just the anxiety alone to try and express how you feel to someone you truly care about is always such a difficult task. For what reason, who knows, since I figure poets would be the best ppl to do such a thing. I guess finding "perfection" in the words is the true struggle, instead of the actual verbiage. thank you for sharing. :)junebjimenezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17598941664469132624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-23746301916074856412011-11-01T18:19:55.627-04:002011-11-01T18:19:55.627-04:00swinging back through on OpenLinkNight just to say...swinging back through on OpenLinkNight just to say hi...hope you have a lovely eve margaret....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-38281192658653465822011-11-01T14:17:15.846-04:002011-11-01T14:17:15.846-04:00This is great! Reminds me if my husband's rel...This is great! Reminds me if my husband's relationship to his car.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-79059748965610736782011-11-01T14:07:48.703-04:002011-11-01T14:07:48.703-04:00this was perfect, I love the line "my pulse r...this was perfect, I love the line "my pulse races, fingertips tingling with possibilities" I feet this way often when I writeChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-720140089305570032011-11-01T12:45:02.133-04:002011-11-01T12:45:02.133-04:00Loved it!
innardsLoved it!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/10/innards.html" rel="nofollow">innards</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-64776649498123743992011-11-01T07:20:37.630-04:002011-11-01T07:20:37.630-04:00Love/hate. Fabulous write, Margaret.Love/hate. Fabulous write, Margaret.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-55882574595178375212011-10-31T16:09:47.796-04:002011-10-31T16:09:47.796-04:00very nice margaret...it is an intimate dance betwe...very nice margaret...it is an intimate dance between the writer and the machine...i hope you are not too long parted...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-73898996329776904012011-10-31T15:12:37.897-04:002011-10-31T15:12:37.897-04:00Love your take on this, Margaret... especially lik...Love your take on this, Margaret... especially like the first stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-26129829499418392332011-10-31T14:40:45.177-04:002011-10-31T14:40:45.177-04:00I like the poem, but I especially like the way you...I like the poem, but I especially like the way you've laid it out with the robot at top hinting at the meaning, and the typewriter as sort of a punchline at the bottom. Of course visitors from Magpie would already be in on the joke. My Magpie this week is <a href="http://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/07/poet.html" rel="nofollow">Poet</a>.Roy Schulzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-59152185309579929842011-10-31T14:31:26.827-04:002011-10-31T14:31:26.827-04:00This could be a metaphor for a real love letter>...This could be a metaphor for a real love letter> Maybe you mean it as such? Very good poem.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.com