tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post1673317934931593806..comments2024-01-11T10:08:36.567-05:00Comments on Of Verse, Poesy & Odes : dVerse "Form For All: On Tritinas "Lovely SaRaMargarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-67280819865390617312012-09-11T09:14:56.553-04:002012-09-11T09:14:56.553-04:00I'm guessing they will treasure this rendering...I'm guessing they will treasure this rendering for years...for ever!Ginnie Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014434422568561157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-68388848124213291592012-09-04T03:36:29.409-04:002012-09-04T03:36:29.409-04:00Both are looking gorgeous in the picture, you need...Both are looking gorgeous in the picture, you need to some changes for making the poem lyrical. you need make flow in the poem, every word should have connected to other word,.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.yourwallart.co.uk" rel="nofollow">contemporary wall art</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13374002948837702255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-18277603735036506222012-09-01T17:21:25.214-04:002012-09-01T17:21:25.214-04:00beautiful. I think you captured their bond quite ...beautiful. I think you captured their bond quite well in this piece. I like the idea that distance cannot stop the feel of the other's arms, "About my heart, your arms"RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-69082611258763724992012-08-31T23:49:06.878-04:002012-08-31T23:49:06.878-04:00I thought the cadence of the poem caught the motio...I thought the cadence of the poem caught the motion of the top picture really well--the feel of two close and loving friends, interlinked and dancing, with that invisible support that love provides. Liked this much, Margaret.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-770241241973021232012-08-31T23:46:03.108-04:002012-08-31T23:46:03.108-04:00Oops, that would be "tritina"--darn auto...Oops, that would be "tritina"--darn auto spell correct!!<br />Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-78152645347566316602012-08-31T23:44:58.442-04:002012-08-31T23:44:58.442-04:00Aw Margaret, you know I love your poetry and image...Aw Margaret, you know I love your poetry and images, and this did not disappoint. Great first triton. Nicely penned!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-17229981414315228392012-08-31T22:03:32.020-04:002012-08-31T22:03:32.020-04:00These moments, these girls, this poem is so amazin...These moments, these girls, this poem is so amazingly precious. No symbols, no iconography, just the projection of joy in the moment and a joy that can transcend distance and time.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-44295704475918508162012-08-31T20:49:04.495-04:002012-08-31T20:49:04.495-04:00Beautiful friends! Wishing them the best of relati...Beautiful friends! Wishing them the best of relations and hopes for the future! Nice write Marge!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-6565880621211189832012-08-31T19:46:51.011-04:002012-08-31T19:46:51.011-04:00Beautiful poem and well done on the prompt! I lov...Beautiful poem and well done on the prompt! I love the photography!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-75758377997902656702012-08-31T16:43:15.031-04:002012-08-31T16:43:15.031-04:00You made it in time for the prompt! What a great t...You made it in time for the prompt! What a great theme you chose. Both the photo and poem just create a feeling of well-being. So good.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-63931569770229225672012-08-31T13:39:01.506-04:002012-08-31T13:39:01.506-04:00Friendship like that is so precious. Lovely piece...Friendship like that is so precious. Lovely piece, Margaret!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-33966546057951459042012-08-31T12:32:25.093-04:002012-08-31T12:32:25.093-04:00I think this is wonderful. I'm sure they will...I think this is wonderful. I'm sure they will both cherish the photos and the poetry. You've really captured the bond between them.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-77001150582115410532012-08-31T11:24:14.462-04:002012-08-31T11:24:14.462-04:00So precious, I really love that photo of them twir...So precious, I really love that photo of them twirling together, you caught the swirls and joy just right. I could write a poem on the bliss that just bounces off that photo. The poem was very lyrical, just like a song. Really enjoyed it--especially since my name is Sara :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-40174770432307874982012-08-31T07:29:46.427-04:002012-08-31T07:29:46.427-04:00Can't beat having a friend for life. Sometimes...Can't beat having a friend for life. Sometimes they become our sisters in a way. The poem is lovely and reflects their shared friendship perfectly. They look soooo happy! :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-166442551139352992012-08-31T03:39:04.365-04:002012-08-31T03:39:04.365-04:00Very beautifully written ... too good for a first ...Very beautifully written ... too good for a first attempt :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-15414370635705606642012-08-31T03:17:49.247-04:002012-08-31T03:17:49.247-04:00Pictures and words match the nood of each Pictures and words match the nood of each John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-49039678848810283242012-08-31T02:04:06.070-04:002012-08-31T02:04:06.070-04:00beautiful poem...it is more beautiful for those yo...beautiful poem...it is more beautiful for those young ladies and their friendship.......enjoyed...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-91102474577190856152012-08-31T00:25:35.875-04:002012-08-31T00:25:35.875-04:00so much worth having a friend like that when even ...so much worth having a friend like that when even the distance can't harm their friendship...lovely job on the form and lovely, lovely pics.. they're both beautyful...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-66440738790108131042012-08-30T23:52:50.917-04:002012-08-30T23:52:50.917-04:00I think the form works well for you, but know what...I think the form works well for you, but know what you mean - not so pleased with mine either! On the other hand - those two girls there - friends - look pretty great. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-45472326598418524552012-08-30T22:16:42.052-04:002012-08-30T22:16:42.052-04:00smiles...i think it is lovely...a lovely wish and ...smiles...i think it is lovely...a lovely wish and a lovely young lady...and friends like that are a rare treasure...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-61422310491433649072012-08-30T22:13:16.279-04:002012-08-30T22:13:16.279-04:00I love the pictures, and the poem enhances them so...I love the pictures, and the poem enhances them so well :)Elise Ann Wormuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11079210360987768732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-2419734737665756762012-08-30T22:01:37.961-04:002012-08-30T22:01:37.961-04:00What a beautiful tritina. You worked the form well...What a beautiful tritina. You worked the form well. Both the words and the photographs make me smile. They are each so VERY fortunate to have a lifetime friend!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3074509503476824621.post-64369600029668409512012-08-30T21:59:48.043-04:002012-08-30T21:59:48.043-04:00precious girls. i hope they will be friends always...precious girls. i hope they will be friends always.TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13641962051044162710noreply@blogger.com